there needed to at least be an excuse as to why those parties didn’t show up for what is described as “the whole city” being turned into bird people. Where is S.H.I.E.L.D.? Where are the Avengers? This isn’t DC. Then, let’s consider the city-wide bird-zombie issue. That, plus Miles noticing Pete’s facial expressions while Peter is wearing a mask? It’s really scary Marvel and Dreamscape editors didn’t catch any of this. The first act goes into great detail and concern about this, yet later on, Peter and Miles call each other by their first names several times around people who could easily overhear. Everything from the (not as big a deal but) constant misuse of I and me to the (very important) author seemingly forgetting that Peter and Miles are in costume and supposed to have secret identities.
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